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PostSubject: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:29 am

Name: Isamu Kinzoku

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Village: Akatsuki Hideout (formerly a village in the Cloud Country)

Family Members: none known

Personality: lazy, laid back, sarcastic, a bit cruel, and ignores all pain (got from recieving Tsukiyomei 5 times in his life)

Clan: Kinzoku (a clan that manipulates metal, and are also talented with using the weapons, which are usually made by themselves)

Ninja Rank: Akatsuki

Elements: Metal, Lightning

Skills: Main: Ninjutsu; Sub: Weaponry

Weapon: Kane, an almost unbreakable great sword that is 6 feet long, very jagged, and made of compacted, chakra infused sky iron which is much stronger than steel, and still it is lighter than steel (check in pic), also Isamu can wield it with one hand


Lightning Jutsus

Chidori Blade: simply chidori powering up a blade, may be off the blade but only lasts 10 seconds then fades away (modified from chidori taught by Jordan)

Lightning Clone: a clone that if hit it shocks anything touching it

Thunder Bomb: user sets a bomb and holds onto an invisible chakra string, by putting chakra through the string to the bomb it ignites and shocks anything within 10 yards

Shocking Edge: user charges blade with chakra, and once it touches someone it paralyzes them for as long as the user keep a constant chakra streem to keep the charge going

Tri-Blade Chidori: User makes two clones to create a triangle and they (user included) all use chidori blade and throw them into the center of the triangle creating an explosion of electricity

Thunder Thrust: a thrust charged with electricity that shoots lightning forward 50 yards , it also creates a lightning sound that anyone close enough may burst there ear drum

Lightning Barrier: creates a barrier of lightning infront of user that stops and shocks andthing that touches it


Metal Jutsus

Metal Summon: summons metal from the earth

Reflecting Substitute: replaces user with a piece of metal that reflects projectiles back to where they were thrown and bends some normal weapons

Metal Shield: surrounds user completely in a hollow ball of metal that is nearly unpenatrable, but the user can not use any chakra while it is out

Liquid Metal: turns user into a state of liquid metal that can slip through any cracks and it is virtually unable to be destroyed

Metal Whip: Extends blade up to 15 yards and is able to bends and twist

Metal Clone: a clone made out of metal that may take a few hits to kill, for it is metal, but it requires to have metal to make it

Summon Golem: summons a golem about 50 yards tall with six arms, each having a version of a blade, covered in very strong armor, and with multiple eyes

Sharpen: repairs all weapons and armor and sharpens them for increased strength

Metal Manipulation: user is able to control metal at his will with this technique


Healing Jutsus

Mending: heals all of the users wounds for a high cost of chakra


Non-Element Jutsus

Piercing Blow: enhances user\'s sword to make it be able to break any shield on the next hit

Flashstep: flashes user forward, distance depends on amount of chakra used


Background Story: Isamu was once living peacefully in the Kinzoku clan\'s village, always messing around, but still helping out. Everytime he pulled a prank, he would make it up to the victim. So one day he put a bucket of muddy water above a slightly cracked open door. Well, the person turned out to be a major medical ninja with various herbs and roots, and the supplies all got ruined. He, being his usual self, went out and got those supplies for her. When he came back the entire village was slaughtered, at least it seemed for there may be survivors, so he went looking for the bandits that destroyed his village. He eventually went mad with hate and falsely accused people of the deed. Soon he started killing people for it, and became an S-ranked ninja for more than two hundred murders.He finally gave up his hopeless search, and calmed him self down out anywhere he was alone. Soon, he was tired of being outnumbered, for he new they would catch him sometime, so he joined the Akatsuki by killing one of its members secretly. Now, he is an excellent ninja, and very sneaky at all times.

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PostSubject: Re: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:35 am

Hi its me Yukiko Kaguya! lol well sorry theres no metal village here you can be from another village on this forum and just change a few things
like where your from/etc but yah it looks pretty good just fix those things, and also lessen some jutsu's some are too overpowered, and yah 2 elements please knowing every element is a little too much

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PostSubject: Re: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:36 am

Change your ninja rank , you should join akatsuki.
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PostSubject: Re: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:37 am

-I don't know about custom villages so I think you should change that

-Metal breath will never be approved so take that out

-only 2 elements

-change your story (It has to do with the custom village thing)

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PostSubject: Re: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:41 am

ok i was just trying to see if this would be ok but im going back to the first version of this char, no gravity no air and an AKATSUKI!!!!!!!! oh and yukiko i made a place for us to train on ninja legends, u gonna be my apprentice Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:43 am

ok lol, oh and I suggest you were formerly from the cloud village since you have thunder jutsus

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PostSubject: Re: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:56 am

I kno I've made this char before, the one on ninjalegends is just a later version than this one
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PostSubject: Re: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 5:00 am

Okay much better , I'd Say Approved now.
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PostSubject: Re: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 5:03 am

Looks good


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PostSubject: Re: Isamu Kinzoku   Sat Apr 19, 2008 6:43 pm

yes, nice chara.

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