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PostSubject: Uchiha, Haruo   Tue Apr 29, 2008 12:23 pm

Name:Uchiha, Haruo

Age:14

Village:Leaf

Ninja Rank: genin

Clan:Uchiha

Looks:

Personality:Calm , pacent , too trusting and puts on a brave face when something bad happens

Special Characteristics:

Element:Fire and Lighting

Skills/Specialties: Weponary and Ninjutsu

Jutsus:
Basic acadmey jutsu Clone, Transformation and Substation

Fire style:
Great fire ball
phoenix flower

Backround/Story:
Not many people know of Haruo's existence the only people wh knew was his dad, mum, hokage and the doctor. He was brought up in a house in Leaf. His academy years were normal he had normal grades and a normal life until the Uchiha clan was supposed to be wiped out.

He trained hard for the next 7 years he learning the phoenix flower jutsu.


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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Tue Apr 29, 2008 2:05 pm

Yikes...well,

-jutsu must have a description

-you need to have lightning, fire, and weaponry jutsu

-you must give a history and background story

-shouldn't sharingan be your special characteristics?

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:33 pm

yeah, and describe all ur custom jutsus

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:36 pm

learn to spell a little better/etc...

examples of what need fixing, we need good spelling and grammer ^.^
pacient
abrave
Weponary
acadmey
Substatuion
Phinouxe

Add story, Characteristics, and customs and thats all

Maruto Its ok for him to only have fire right now hes only a genin
He can learn Lightning/weaponry later.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:51 pm

dat 2, well anyways, u still need a lot of work

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Mon May 05, 2008 4:46 pm

BigJay please fix up your character...
You will have 2 weeks at max to fix this up if you do not your
character will be locked.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Mon May 05, 2008 4:56 pm

actually, i think he only needs a history. all the jutsus are not made up, so i think he's good, except for the history/backround.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Tue May 06, 2008 11:55 am

I disagree Lee, he still hasn't repaired their grammer, the only word fixed was Phoenix, but yah he should just fix his grammer a bit, and add some more to history. but besides that he is fine

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Tue May 06, 2008 4:10 pm

watever. dat works too

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Fri May 09, 2008 2:51 am

I changed it
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Fri May 09, 2008 4:46 pm

Still needs some work, ALOT of work.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Fri May 09, 2008 6:29 pm

k, it's been here for a long time. if he's not done editing by sunday, it'll b locked

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Fri May 09, 2008 10:43 pm

I don't see any changes for grammer/etc... lol and the History needs to be longer not as long as mine but at least 1 full paragraph (5 sentenses)

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Sat May 10, 2008 5:00 pm

This is going to end up just like that last topic, LOCKED. Only a few hours until sunday, so if your not on by then it's locked.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Haruo   Sun May 11, 2008 5:16 pm

srry dude, but this topic is oficially locked. srry

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